Here it is,
autumn again
I can just tell
It's one of the easier things
to remember:
autumn
The leaves fall down
from thin fingers of branch,
the trees wrapped all around
this house
It used to be our house,
Her house
The sky's dark face hangs over it,
over her house, darkening
the days peeling off like dead skin
And I see them too,
my sons
They run and flash
like two movies
playing side by side
on the walls of me
Different films,
both running at the same rate of speed
Moving, dancing in light,
in ways I've come to know
They appear brighter now,
nights stretching over them
around shorter and shorter days
Autumn, so similar to what I remember,
but colder and sharper somehow
Vivid cold
snapping into light
The rewrite is so good. You are incredible.
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